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parafighter
Clan Jade Falcon
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Joined: 02-Apr-2005 00:00
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 Posted: 11-Feb-2006 17:46 Post subject: First Warship |
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I got HeavyMetal Aero today, so this is my first warship design. What do you think? 
AeroTech 2 Vessel Technical Readout
VALIDATED
Class/Model/Name: Raider
Tech: Inner Sphere / 3067
Vessel Type: WarShip
Rules: Level 2, Custom design
Rules Set: AeroTech2
Mass: 300,000 tons
K-F Drive System: (Unknown)
Length: 463 meters
Sail Diameter: 947 meters
Power Plant: Standard
Safe Thrust: 7
Maximum Thrust: 11
Armor Type: Standard
Armament:
1 Heavy N-Gauss
14 Large Laser
10 NL35
8 Medium Laser
1 Barracuda
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Class/Model/Name: Raider
Mass: 300,000 tons
Equipment: Mass
Power Plant, Drive & Control: 126,000.00
Thrust: Safe Thrust: 7
Maximum Thrust: 11
Kearny-Fuchida Hyperdrive: Compact (Integrity = 7) 135,750.00
Lithium Fusion Battery 3,000.00
Jump Sail: (Integrity = 3) 45.00
Structural Integrity: 47 14,100.00
Total Heat Sinks: 685 Single 139.00
Fuel & Fuel Pumps: 1,530.00
Bridge, Controls, Radar, Computer & Attitude Thrusters: 750.00
Fire Control Computers: .00
Food & Water: (15 days supply) 13.00
Armor Type: Standard (143 total armor pts) 281.50
Capital Scale Armor Pts
Location: L / R
Fore: 30
Fore-Left/Right: 23/23
Aft-Left/Right: 23/23
Aft: 21
Cargo:
Bay 1: Cargo (1) with 1 door 150.00
Bay 2: Cargo (1) with 1 door 150.00
Bay 3: Cargo (1) with 1 door 56.00
DropShip Capacity: 2 Docking Hardpoints 2,000.00
Grav Deck #1: (150-meter diameter) 100.00
Escape Pods: 30 (7 tons each) 210.00
Crew and Passengers:
21 Officers (21 minimum) 210.00
90 Crew (84 minimum) 630.00
16 Gunners (16 minimum) 112.00
50 Marines 250.00
Weapons and Equipment Loc SRV MRV LRV ERV Heat Mass
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1 Heavy N-Gauss(10 rounds) Nose 30 30 30 30 18 7,005.00
3 Large Laser Nose 2(24) 2(24) -- -- 24 15.00
3 Large Laser Nose 2(24) 2(24) -- -- 24 15.00
1 NL35 Nose 4 4 4 -- 52 700.00
1 NL35 Nose 4 4 4 -- 52 700.00
1 NL35 FL/R 4 4 4 -- 104 1,400.00
2 Large Laser FL/R 2(16) 2(16) -- -- 32 20.00
1 NL35 L/RBS 4 4 4 -- 104 1,400.00
2 Large Laser L/RBS 2(16) 2(16) -- -- 32 20.00
1 NL35 AL/R 4 4 4 -- 104 1,400.00
2 Medium Laser AL/R 1(10) -- -- -- 12 4.00
1 Barracuda(10 msls) Aft 2 2 2 2 10 390.00
1 NL35 Aft 4 4 4 -- 52 700.00
1 NL35 Aft 4 4 4 -- 52 700.00
2 Medium Laser Aft 1(10) -- -- -- 6 2.00
2 Medium Laser Aft 1(10) -- -- -- 6 2.00
1 Lot Spare Parts (0.02%) 50.50
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TOTALS: Heat: 684 300,000.00
Tons Left: .00
Calculated Factors:
Total Cost: 9,391,010,000 C-Bills
Battle Value: 29,980
Cost per BV: 313,242.49
Weapon Value: 16,196 (Ratio = .54)
Damage Factors: SRV = 755; MRV = 697; LRV = 488; ERV = 195
Maintenance: Maintenance Point Value (MPV) = 356,279
(59,087 Structure, 274,425 Life Support, 22,767 Weapons)
Support Points (SP) = 144,953 (41% of MPV)
BattleForce2: Not applicable
[ This Message was edited by: parafighter on 2006-02-11 17:48 ]
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Kalo Osis
Clan Ice Hellions
Star Colonel
Joined: 07-Jul-2005 00:00
Posts: 446
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| Posted: 11-Feb-2006 18:16 Post subject: RE: First Warship |
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It seems decent but a little fluff could help sway my desicion.
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Vagabond
Mercenary
Mr. Referee
Joined: 04-Feb-2002 00:00
Posts: 5788
Location: United States
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| Posted: 13-Feb-2006 04:16 Post subject: RE: First Warship |
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slow it down to 6/9, drop the barracuda, and replace the NGauss with 2 NAC/30. Use weight savings to increase ammo on all weapons. In addition, consolidate your cargo bays because you have to little cargo. Create a small craft bay with supply cargo bay and increase spare parts to 1 percent [preferably 2.]
Decrease your Marines unless this is a boarding craft, which in that case create a small craft bay with several vessels for the boarding pods.
If this is a military craft, you may not want to equip it with 100% escape systems. 50% is usually good. however, you have an absence of small craft so the systems remaing is a good option.
Increase food and fuel to atleast 30 day and 60 day supply respectively. As a raider you will need fuel for manuvers and consumbales for deep penitration raids.
You might consider loosing the LF Battery. It gives the ability to get in and out quickly, but most systems have a nadir to planet travel time of 5+ days. You can fusion charge in that time for an egress jump. It would give you 3000 tons to use.
Overall, it is not a bad design. It has some promise, but it needs some spit and polish.
I agree though, you need to supply fluff.
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